The latest version of SANCTUARY, the re-mixable short film, based on 10weeks.
Posted by .M. at October 26, 2003 08:58 AMFrom Liz:
Strengthen relationship between Blake and Jon. Hangs on one line. Needs to be set up at beginning.
1st impression - bewilderment, virtual world
Create more menace by showing Techs?
Blake spends lots of screen time demonstrating tech skill.
Everything said has to revela something about character.
Ending is very open, unsatisfying. Deliberate?
Watch tone. Casual asides detract from tension.
Very fast, quick changes, etc = good
What makes it different?
Posted by: .M. at October 26, 2003 02:14 PM