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October 07, 2003

Story new bits

New stuff waiting to go in for the next script.

The crowds want more motivation. They just can't understand that a little girl like Blake could be so full on against the State. They don't get it. Neither does Blake. She's a confused kid.

Jon is Uncle Jon, Dad's younger brother. Mark may be female, I don't know. Either way, Blake is very jealous. That should be her down there helping Jon fight back against the troopers. One more thing, the activists are being framed. Not content with destroying the last natural bushland in the State, the troopers have been instructed by the Chief to plant the story that this was a terrorist action. The destroyed bush is being rearranged so that it looks as if the activists had blown several vehicles. In fact there was no such action.

Something happens at the end of the film that is not planned for by Blake and certainly not planned by Axel.

The Chief demonstrates his all pervasive power online by dredging up memories of Blake masterbating in her bedroom.

Posted by .M. at October 7, 2003 10:59 PM
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