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KEYFRAME |
SHOT |
LOCATION / (GUI) |
SCENE (v4 script) |
POV |
PRODUCTION NOTE |
STORY NOTE |
| 1.
"Let this be a cautionary tale |
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Virtual Blake watches |
Virtual Bush |
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3rd person |
Live action. VR colour scheme. |
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| 2. About
virtual worlds. |
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Blake and CD watch. |
Virtual Bush/CD |
15 |
3rd person |
Live action. VR colour scheme. CD
integrated in post. |
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| 3.
Daniel always said “Mind your own business.” |
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Daniel threatens to take Blake's
RIG |
Bedroom / Indy |
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Blake's RIG |
Live action. GUI element appears
briefly (e.g. audio when Dad raise voice) to establish POV |
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| 4. Now
he’s dead |
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Daniel dying |
Bush / Indy |
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Nano-bat |
Strobing or still. Brief error
message. |
Sample from nano-bat high speed
pass. Bandwidth/network error message to explain strobe |
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| 5. And
it’s my fault. |
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Blake at school. Kid drinking
Coke behind her. |
Classroom |
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3rd person |
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| 6. I
broke into his system |
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Daniel at work in his office. |
Home office / Indy |
N/A |
3rd person |
Not in script |
Not in script but useful extra.
Blake hacking Hacker Dad's system. |
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| 7. and
stole software. |
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CD onscreen of Personal RIG
Device |
Classroom |
3 |
Blake |
Quick cutaway under desk.
"RIG activated." overlay perhaps? |
RIG technology not allowed in
class. Blake uses this to hack class video presentation |
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| 8. I
used the software to hack into government files. |
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Blake reads files in the
Registry. CD bringing more over. |
Registry/CD |
11 |
3rd person |
Live action Registry and files
branded with DENR logo. Onscreen messages via CD |
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| 9. One
of which I posted online |
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Surveillance footage showing
logging equipment moving into position |
Registry/State |
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Blake |
Insert. Web page arrangement of
stills. |
Confidential plans for
re-development of Sanctuary unannounced. |
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| 10.
Never suspecting… |
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Same view of logging data. Indy
IM chatting superimposed |
Registry/Indy |
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Blake |
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| 11. the
information inside was a trap. |
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Activists in handcuffs |
Virtual Bush / State |
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Trooper cam |
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| 12. Never suspecting |
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Blake sitting in tree, staring
dumbfounded at seeing Daniel. |
Virtual Bush / CD |
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3rd person |
CD can be removed to make this a
'GREEN' shot |
"Dad?". Blake
surprised and puzzled |
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| 13.
who would be caught in it. |
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Daniel throwing nano-bat |
Virtual Bush / State |
22 |
Trooper |
Start of nano-bat sequence. Cut
between virtual bat action, real bat action and Blake reaction shots. |
Activation of nanobat is
detected by State. Bats visible in Bush and Virtual Bush simultaneously try
to escape onto public net. Opportunity to see bat in virtual bush as data
packet trying to squeeze through flat background of State's Bush sim (to
escape into public space) while in real world bat is simply moving out of
range of local network. |
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| 14.
<NO CAPTION> |
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Trooper fires at Daniel. |
Virtual Bush / State |
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Bush cam |
Strobing or still |
Shortly followed by nano-bat
being shot down |
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| 13. How
can I live with this? |
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ECU. Blake |
Virtual Bush |
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3rd person |
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| 15.
Yesterday this was paradise. |
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Bushfire ravaged bush. |
Bush |
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3rd person |
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| 14. If
I could be anyone one else right now… |
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CU. Trooper turning to camera. |
Virtual Bush |
1 |
3rd person |
CG Blade briefly reflected in
visor. |
Logic bug in script v4 - has to
be Virtual not Real Bush to see Blake |
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| 15. I
would be." |
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CU. Blade attacks. |
Virtual Bush / State |
25 |
Trooper |
Very quick, flying at Trooper,
then POV malfunction |
Blade's quick reveal then
Trooper's POV malfunction |
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