Comments: Final NESTA page

also interested on film side is David Minkowski (Stillking Productions - AVP, XXX, etc.)

Posted by Ken at February 23, 2004 12:45 PM

cut 'my' from

"I see a need for:

* a new framework for making and distributing my stories"

to imply that the framework you set up will be a model/standard methodology that is embraced by the film and gamemaking industries en masse.

Posted by Ken at February 23, 2004 02:32 PM

"I am one of the first of a new generation of cross-over artists working with online film distribution..."

... how about "production, management and distribution"? need to clarify that your background enables you to put online resources to full use to enhance the collaborative creative process that is filmmaking.

Posted by Ken at February 23, 2004 02:36 PM

"Game makers lack training in film narrative and story-telling"

...er, a lot of filmmakers have no training in that discipline either... only experience.

Posted by Ken at February 23, 2004 02:39 PM

"Film assets are typically viewed as disposable rather than re-cyclable"

maybe use "immutable" (my favourite word) as opposed to disposable - less potentially offensive to filmmakers, and less negative overall. actually, do you mean those bits that don't make it into the final cut? in which vase maybe split this into 2

a) Final cuts (entry as suggested above)
b) unused footage, soundtrack, artwork, sets etc. - entry as per original

Posted by Ken at February 23, 2004 02:45 PM

* people crave ORIGINAL stories

Posted by Ken at February 23, 2004 02:46 PM

"What we sell is..."

- as per Christine

Posted by Ken at February 23, 2004 02:47 PM
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