1.6
- not sure about use of word 'unisex' - implies uniformity, no distinguishing features. The short appeals to both sexes in different ways, maybe illustrate this.
- what does the jigsaw-puzzle-piece-plus-arrow diagram represent? I understand it in the context of 1.8.3, but here?

1.8
- '...set of functions that called by mods' Typo?

1.8.1
- engine capable of 30fps - but we're shooting at 24/25 fps, right...?

1.8.3
- the diagram heading is not on the same page as the diagram.

1.8.4.1
- second para needs rewording for clarity.
- do the State Records include dialogue, etc. as well as character files as well (i.e. by surveillance)?
- para starting "Assets are always referenced", second sentence not clear at all.

1.8.4.2
- so what purpose does the DVD serve during run-time?
- won't the writing of assets to disk
*take up a huge amount of disk space, and
*take a very long time to upload?
- if this needs to happen only the first time, then does the DVD serve the same purpose as a CD-ROM does once a game has been installed?
- Will the RIG stay exclusively on the DVD?

2.3.2
- 1st OP (Disruptor key): "...like scratching an LP by"...?

Other than that, I understand it all... ...I think.