From Liz:

Strengthen relationship between Blake and Jon. Hangs on one line. Needs to be set up at beginning.

1st impression - bewilderment, virtual world

Create more menace by showing Techs?

Blake spends lots of screen time demonstrating tech skill.

Everything said has to revela something about character.

Ending is very open, unsatisfying. Deliberate?

Watch tone. Casual asides detract from tension.

Very fast, quick changes, etc = good

What makes it different?