Any thoughts on this as an approach?
QANTAS sponsorship form (from http://www.qantas.com.au/info/about/community/index)
Posted by .M. at June 15, 2004 07:34 PMAt an initial glance early in the morning, these are my comments:
Paragraph 2: edit end of first sentence to read: revolutionise the "film" industry.
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You've mentioned that you will be filming in NSW, if you know the exact location, tell them where.
You mention having a tight budget, you should also mention how many people are working on this.
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I think you should embellish this paragraph a bit more:
In particular, that it is a world first
Highlight Australia's natural beauty
It might be wise to find out how far Qantas is involved on the "global festival cirucit"
Do you have any plans to bring Santuary to Australia, if so, I think you should mention this.
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Is .5, 6 months or 5 years. I think you should make this clearer.
Also use strong language in the last sentence.
I hope this helps, I look at this again, later in the day and try and come up with other things.
Lots of Love
F
Thanks Fiona.
I've updated as per feedback.
Also had a chat to the QANTAS marketing/communications office here in London about their support of films in Europe. Seems they don't do much but I've got the details of the Marketing manager and was advised to email her ahead of any fax'ed request back to Aus. I'll give her a call when she's back next week on 22nd.
Caren Reeves
creeves@qantas.com.au
0208 846 0503